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一见封喉 发表于 2008-5-27 13:36

earthquake

there was an earthquake in lijiang in may 24th.  but it was only a little quake.
all of us were asleep in our bedroom,so when we feel our bed had a  shock, wo got up at once,
i call my friends,but i can't get touch with them. i was so worry about them.
we stay at the playground that night until 5 o'clock . there were so many many people.
  we are  good luck,it haven't raining that night.
  it was an unforgetable night.
  no more earthquake,please.
  we should  learn how to  protect ourselves when the earthquake  comes.
  no excuse.

钚恁麋嘧 发表于 2008-5-27 17:58

we should  learn how to  protect ourselves when the earthquake  comes.

鸡仔贰号 发表于 2008-5-30 12:21

宿舍,you can say dormitory instead bedroom.
the last  sentence you can say we should  learn how to  protect ourselves from the earthquake.短语的运用对文章有很大的作用/

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